the leaves falling down
colorless on the cold wind
my heart breaks like ice
~Cie~
Notes:
I guess I came close to following the traditional Haiku rules, but if not, you can tell me that I suck and should go die in a fire like the trash poet (and excuse for a human being) that I am. For me, the expression is always more important than the rules, and it's difficult to teach a very old and stupid dog new tricks.
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